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« Reply #60 on: 12 January 2010, 04:09:29 »

Done done and done?
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« Reply #61 on: 12 January 2010, 07:08:18 »

As Talia does not seem to take issue with the way the territory has been described, it seems so. Might you take a glance at the Ferlawyng entry, too? Mira had said he would look at it over a week ago, and still nothing.  undecided
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« Reply #62 on: 12 January 2010, 18:49:30 »

When I have time, yes.

Give this a blarrow, I have to run, dont have time to do it myself!!!
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« Reply #63 on: 12 January 2010, 20:45:27 »

Territory is fine.
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« Reply #64 on: 13 January 2010, 07:22:21 »

Per Talia's approval and Deci's request, blarrowed.  heart
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« Reply #65 on: 25 January 2010, 03:45:01 »

Oh dear.

Rayne I just noticed when this went up that you hadn't edited in the Myth section with my proposed changes. I hadn't double-checked it since your later posts said the religion thing had been clarified and fixed so I thought that meant you had made the change.

Could you please go back and replace the myth section with the edited form I wrote in my other post? We'll then need to inform Arti that he needs to edit it on site.

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Avhan is considered an omnipotent god, so he would not be one who 'could not eliminate it (the storm) entirely from the sky'.

On the other hand, he would make it a punishment for sins. You could instead say,

"They prayed to Avhan to stop the endless storm, but as the storm arose from their sins, Avhan would not eliminate it entirely from the sky. However, hearing their cries, he chose to take mercy, and decided to give the storm a more corporeal form, turning it into hundreds of drakes that fled to the nearby volcanoes, and there they have dwelled ever since.  When the storms again come to the area, the people of Thalambath say these dragons are to remind them of their sins, and the dragons flit through the storm as a demonstration to those beneath of Avhan's power, as well as his mercy."

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