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« Reply #15 on: 12 January 2010, 02:45:44 »

Wait, who blarrowed this? Deci? I don't see anything from a mod regarding that it was ready for Blarrow.  huh
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« Reply #16 on: 12 January 2010, 02:54:56 »

Yes, Deci Blarrowed it. It was Blarrowed when you commented lol. I had been poking him, because no one else had made any comments on the material.

But again, it doesn't matter it seems. Does changing 'resemblances' to 'resemblance' fix your 'uneasy feeling' about the sentences?
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« Reply #17 on: 12 January 2010, 04:08:09 »

*sighs*

What ever happened to the days when a blarrow meant 'we are done here'?
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« Reply #18 on: 12 January 2010, 04:26:23 »

Does the sentence sound alright to you, Deci?
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« Reply #19 on: 12 January 2010, 05:39:35 »

Yep.
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« Reply #20 on: 12 January 2010, 07:25:58 »

I avoided commenting originally since Kalina and I share some differing views about style and grammar, and it was a WIP for so long, and I hate getting in the way.  undecided

If anyone (Kalina or otherwise) wants me to look at something, I am more than happy to: just bell-ring me. Because I do style/grammar checks, the subject of the entry does not matter as much. It is occasionally difficult to know who wants a check from me and who does not. I think many people would rather go without.
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« Reply #21 on: 12 January 2010, 10:08:30 »

As long as it makes sense, I am not overly picky. Again, with the particular phrase Azhira was pointing out, I believe the issue was the one I stated above. It is amazing how one word/letter can throw off an entire sentence.

If you wish to go through it Rayne, feel free to as everyone else seems to think it is the best time to comment.

PS: It was "!" for about a week and a half on and off. Since I wasn't getting any comments, I just kept reworking the overviews myself.
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« Reply #22 on: 13 January 2010, 22:26:32 »

I am fine with this now.  :) Move along, move along...
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« Reply #23 on: 13 January 2010, 23:36:53 »

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« Reply #24 on: 14 January 2010, 02:31:44 »

Ah! So Kalina attempted a "secret blarrow" by batting her pretty eyelashes at the handsome bestiary mod! I see how its done.

*notes to try that technique in the future*

My practice is to post a final question asking for any more comments before blarrow. That way, if no one comments and it's blarrowed, you can say TOO LATE!! BWAHAHAHA!

It gives people a last chance to comment
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« Reply #25 on: 14 January 2010, 04:05:34 »

Sorry for the confusion.

Just, don't wait until there is a blarrow next time?  buck
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