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Rayne (Alýr)
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« on: 24 January 2010, 08:27:21 »

I’ve been back on the boards for a few months now, and in that time have stirred all sorts of chaos that has no doubt led to some hurt feelings. I regret these effects; I realize that my intentions are often misunderstood. My intention here is to aid in the creation of a beautiful Dream--one we all can share, and in which we can all respect one another--not to hurt anyone or make anyone feel bad.

I hope I can be forgiven.


Unforgiven

The birds turn quiet as the night
descends upon the forest trees.
Slowly now the moon grows bright.
Its frozen gaze alights spare leaves.
The nightwinds howl in the chill.
Across the sky the stars are driv’n
She lingers here in silence still
And waits to be forgiv’n.

Horizon melts from blues to reds
as darkness takes the sky
The flowers bow their petalled heads
But wait till dawn to cry

The air is filled with haunting sounds
that seem to echo through the sky,
and somewhere far away resounds
A voice like a stifled cry.
Arising in this length’ning hour
the nightmares rise from deep in dreams
With hungry demons to devour
each light or hopeful gleam.

The ghosts rise up from out their beds
When darkest hour is nigh
The flowers bow their petalled heads
And pray till dawn to cry

The moon is growing ever dim
And dark gray clouds are moving in
The world grows soft and sad and grim
The silent air grows cold and thin.
And then the sky begins to storm--
The rain to earth is coldly giv’n
She lingers here, with shiv’ring form,
And waits to be forgiv’n

The rain comes down; the darkness spreads;
the breezes sadly sigh.
The flowers bow their petalled heads
But wait till dawn to die
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« Reply #1 on: 24 January 2010, 11:39:23 »

Bad Rayne! Sowing chaos and discord!  evil You are so grounded. Off to the Greenhouse with you!

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Don't feel bad, dear. You've crammed more creativity into these boards in your short return here than most do in years. I thought I was a prolific developer until you came along. You've sucked me away from my North that I don't know how I can get back! lol

And coming from a die-hard Shamaness like me, that is saying something!

Keep up the good work. Don't let them get ya down. Buck up, soldier! No time for guilt. We've got entries to get done. Us elves have to stick together and run this show, eh?

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« Reply #2 on: 24 January 2010, 15:45:25 »

Nothing says sorry like a fesh baked apple pie.... so..... rolleyes
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« Reply #3 on: 25 January 2010, 06:37:46 »


Forgiven

Injerá‘s rays are glist‘ning bright
Upon the drops of nightly dew
The Injóh‘s song does end the night
And Aelirels ascend in blue.
The Southern winds warm up the earth
And  friendly laughter fills the air.
Remove your tears, enjoy new birth,
No harm is done, forget the blare.

The firmament  relumes with gold,
A maiden day has broken, 
The flowers worst the deadly cold
Raised petals proof unspoken.





*puts head in sand* I'm so terrible with poetry, have no idea if it is possible to write this way
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« Reply #4 on: 31 January 2010, 06:34:12 »

Wow...that was good. You did a great job thats amazing!
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