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Azhira Styralias
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« Reply #15 on: 07 June 2011, 23:30:11 »
Don't forget to make the rat less fat and healthy and more skinny, malnourished and diseased. I didn't see that anyone acknowledged my comment above... rolleyes The pic just as much affects my entries as it does Rooks.

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« Reply #16 on: 08 June 2011, 04:25:13 »
Sorry Azhira, it's true that there is a tendancy to think all Brownie development falls under my scope, whilst in actual fact both you and Garret have made huge contributions to the race's development.  I'll drop you a pm - maybe we can think of some easy ways to reajust the perspective?  :)

I was trying to think of some easy ways to make the rat look more like a diseased city rat (which I was trying to get into my comments) - do you reckon giving the fur a bit more of a dirty look?  Perhaps the tail less shiny and more....icky?  Or is it simply that it seems too plump?
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« Reply #17 on: 08 June 2011, 07:10:57 »
Azhira,  Yes yes.  In fact I plan on addressing all the suggestions provided.  All are good and will make things more accurate and better all around.  So anymore suggestions are still welcome.
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« Reply #18 on: 10 June 2011, 11:56:23 »
Thanks everyone (Dek, Alt, Talia, Ath, Irid, Shabby, Drassy, Arty and Azhy  :D) The encouragement was very helpful because I was skeptical of the first version.  As you see I made quite a few changes and attempted to place the picture in a less sunlit setting.  I beleive I addressed all the suggestions.  I decided to go with a cat instead of a human face.  

To answer a few questions:
The brownie is meant to have a hunchback as they are misshapen.  
The quiver is indeed a thimble with Q-tips in them.  glad you noticed.  I realize Q-tips in Santharia is a bit of a stretch but I figured it would be fun.  
The colorful beads are just that ... beads  grin.  I made them bigger when I realized the scale was off.

More suggestions or ideas are welcome if you guys have any.  I am particularly interested in knowing when the authors are happy with the technicalities of the characters.
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« Reply #19 on: 10 June 2011, 14:16:19 »
I love what you did with the rat!

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« Reply #20 on: 10 June 2011, 17:08:21 »
That is an awesome...er, awful...rat!   I shouldn't like to encounter either of those twain in a dark alley even if I am a 'Bigjobs'....
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« Reply #21 on: 10 June 2011, 17:45:40 »
 thumbup  Love it!  Much more atmospheric now.  Great job, my friend. :D
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« Reply #22 on: 10 June 2011, 22:11:53 »
Everyone is worried about the rat and brownie. Does no one see that CAT?
*doesn't want to run into that cat*
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« Reply #23 on: 10 June 2011, 23:29:55 »
They all look wicked now - rat, Brownie and cat! Really great update, Seeker, wonderful picture!  thumbup
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« Reply #24 on: 11 June 2011, 08:04:10 »
This is awesome! I heart the cat's face in the broken glass!  thumbup
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« Reply #25 on: 11 June 2011, 08:09:04 »
Would I be correct in my belief that i've fought some of that rat's cousins in Nepris?

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« Reply #26 on: 11 June 2011, 10:35:09 »
Quite the fun picture! The cat is particularly cute. Perhaps you should present a full cat portrait next ;)
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« Reply #27 on: 24 June 2011, 22:35:34 »
I'd say this one's ready to be integrated, so I'll take it in!  thumbup
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« Reply #28 on: 24 June 2011, 23:36:38 »
Oh right, I approve the new pic too!

Be sure to include it in the rat brownie entry and the city rat entry.  ;)
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