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« Reply #15 on: 07 September 2012, 00:44:11 »

*bows to the wise scholars who deal with this with the aim to find clear words to help others understanding it*

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« Reply #16 on: 07 September 2012, 01:44:30 »

I'm no magician, but the Conservation of Voice principle as currently formulated requires that there be a 1:1 ratio of ahm and soor. The harmony is to be "in the form of equality".
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« Reply #17 on: 12 September 2012, 01:04:14 »

Am Uriing, if that's OK?
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« Reply #18 on: 13 September 2012, 00:34:37 »

Probably Rayne should first deal with Coren's comments before you Uri the entry, Ath, in case there are further changes. Besides, I basically looked the entry already through in detail, and wanted to put it up, so another detailed Uri isn't really necessary from my point of view - especially as Rayne pretty much knows the topic and her spelling :)
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« Reply #19 on: 13 September 2012, 02:37:27 »

Well, there's stuff I've found that's not been picked up so far, so if you don't mind I'll finish and post and then let a decision be taken. There's no obligation incurred by the posting of a check, but it does mean that final proofreading is easier.

I personally think that, if this is going to be a case of a few quick fixes as per Coren's comments, it makes more sense to post a check now rather than doing two rounds of edits. If there are major changes that need another proofing, I may not even have time then. As things stand, my best bet for helping with this is posting a Uri on what there is and, if the entry is substantially changed, contributing what I can then. Ultimately, I have to contribute while I can.

And trust me - I have no intention of contending with Rayne on the intricacies of Ximaxian theory, but in "SPAG" four eyes are better than two.
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« Reply #20 on: 13 September 2012, 04:51:35 »

All fine then, Ath, go ahead!  thumbup  cool
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« Reply #21 on: 14 September 2012, 16:28:39 »

Just a short note: yes, all comments at once. I'm not sure when I will have time to get to them. Between my crazy work schedule, community projects, limited internet, lack of convenience stores ( cry ) and lots of work, it's hard to find time to get here on a regular basis--but when I do, perhaps I can address everything at once. I just can't make any promises as to when I'll be able to get to it!  undecided
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