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« Reply #15 on: 12 September 2008, 05:34:50 »

Indeed!

Talia, I notified Arti of your blessing you gave me today in PMs. You and I are already set to go now. I also posted in the Moot for discussion in case you missed it.  thumbup
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« Reply #16 on: 16 June 2009, 18:53:22 »

Hello Talia! Hope the ceremony went well! Nothing urgent, but whenever you have half an hour to spare, could you take a quick look at this? http://www.santharia.com/dev/index.php/topic,13613.msg169117/topicseen.html#new
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« Reply #17 on: 16 June 2009, 19:06:43 »

Yes, I will, but not before I have commented on some other stuff. (You know, I can't refuse a request of you ;) )

So, surely not before next week, is that early enough? Or do you need to have comments before the update, which is next weekend, I fear?
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« Reply #18 on: 16 June 2009, 20:48:00 »

I don't mind either way. Thanks! :)

Maybe you could quickly skim the first two pages or so to see if the "tone" is accessible? (if not I can use the week in between to further simplify the entry)
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« Reply #19 on: 19 July 2009, 16:13:48 »

Was told I need your approval to move forward with my entry.

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« Reply #20 on: 20 July 2009, 01:45:14 »

No, you don't, you have Art's and Alysse's, right?  :)

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« Reply #21 on: 20 July 2009, 02:01:47 »

He told me I needed to speak with those who had issues with the previous draft and have them review the updated version.

He said he wouldn't give his approval because he had no issues with the first draft, but others did.

Just doing as I was instructed.
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« Reply #22 on: 20 July 2009, 08:16:06 »

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Was told I need your approval to move forward with my entry.

And???

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He told me I needed to speak with those who had issues with the previous draft and have them review the updated version.

He said he wouldn't give his approval because he had no issues with the first draft, but others did.

Just doing as I was instructed.

I doubt that anybody instructed you to come and bark at me.


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Telàmorí, you are writing yourself:

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I am not going to colour what has been changed, as I completely rewrote each section.

And I'm not going to reread a completely rewritten submission. If Alysse and others - and Art  - are ok with it, then  why should I go through it again? I have put enough time into it and I won't spend more, especially not if my attention is not welcome. 





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« Reply #23 on: 20 July 2009, 09:50:47 »

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I think you are misinterpreting my visitation, Talia. I figured it would be easier to read uncoloured as it was completely rewritten from top to bottom according to your preferences. I wasn't sure who to speak to, so I spoke to Artimidor, who directed me to you. I apologise if you feel barked at, as that was far from my intention, but it seems you don't like me to begin with.

I guess I am between a rock and a hard place at this point, as no one will look at it because they are waiting for another.

It is your approval which it ultimately desired, as you were the one who spent the most time picking it apart originally, to make it what it is today.

Forgive me if my attentions are incorrect and I will simply let the entry fall into the abyss.

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« Reply #24 on: 20 July 2009, 14:38:55 »

Well, then I will wait a bit if there are still comments, and if there aren't any, I assume that everyone's fine with it and integrate it, Telàmorí :) And I didn't hear you barking, just friendly asking. Personally I'm glad that you took it in your hands to do another draft, so I'd be happy to put it up eventually.
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« Reply #25 on: 20 July 2009, 17:52:47 »

Artimidor, that was not just friendly asking, maybe not barking, but that was what came to my mind when I read it a second time after I tried to be friendly in my first answer. It is a pity, that you don't see the difference between:

 "Was told I need your approval to move forward with my entry."

or

"I was told I need your approval to move forward with my entry, could you please have a last look at it?"

Especially, as Telà told me already before, that my comments are not welcome.

As I said, there are other comments meanwhile, like Alysses's, which voice that it is ok, so just put it up. No need to spend more developing time on it.
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« Reply #26 on: 20 July 2009, 23:48:41 »

Just clarifying what seems to be the result of a language barrier here:

In English, dropping the subject of the sentence(in this case I) is a very coloquial way of speaking and is frequently used when the subject being discussed is evident.  In this case, Telmori wasn't commanding you to look at her entry Talia, but rather speaking in an informal manner.
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« Reply #27 on: 22 July 2009, 01:46:34 »

Any word back from Rookie yet, Tal?


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No, not yet, but I'll contact you soon. :)

Edit: Did you just edit my post, or am I going insane? ;)
Thanks again!

Edit 2:

I did edit it, it was so meant in the beginning, that one edits the post with the question/request :D
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« Reply #28 on: 29 September 2009, 04:10:10 »

Talia! Yoohoo?

Thoughts on my saints/patron template please. I'm ready to develop the patron of magic now!  :D
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« Reply #29 on: 29 September 2009, 05:45:41 »

Uhhh - tomorrow?

I'll read it tonight and sleep with it...
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