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Ta`lia of the Seven Jewels
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« Reply #15 on: 10 July 2004, 06:58:00 »

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I must say your forum is one of the most sincere I have come across


*ponders, if that is a compliment or not*

;)    :lol  

mialle, I thought I would find a story following your link - not house rules...

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« Reply #16 on: 10 July 2004, 07:06:00 »

Although it was rhetorical, yes, it most certainly is -- at least compared to some of the other places I post around.
I like your names here, for many are beautiful examples of good RPG characters, such as D&D character names. I haven't in most of my 15 year old life found any of my fellow gaming friends create such beautiful and artistic names.

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Have you read my story to which I provided a link?

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« Reply #17 on: 10 July 2004, 08:31:00 »

Your link leads to a pdf with House Rules, that is not exactly what I understand as a story...

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« Reply #18 on: 10 July 2004, 08:38:00 »

Uhmm... yeah... looks like role playing stuff, but not precisely like a story...


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« Reply #19 on: 10 July 2004, 18:53:00 »

My mistake. Here it is again, though I have fixed up the link further up-post as well for your and other readers convenience...

:wink2  Cheers,

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« Reply #20 on: 12 July 2004, 05:53:00 »

Interesting to read, your story, mialle. I assume, it is part of a bigger endeavour. If it stands alone, it is a bit difficult to get about what you are actually talking. Why was this woman veiled and why did she have to die, when her veil was removed? Maybe I have difficulties, because I'm not a native speaker, however, I never have problems when I read something f.e. Dala or Drogo have written, though I miss several words which I have to look up sometimes, if I want to get the last meaning out of the text.

What did disturb me very much, is your successive wrongly placing of your commas. Don't say, it is your own special style, it is grammatically wrong and really stopping the flow of the text.

But that is nothing that should hinder you to try your hands on Santharian stuff, just be aware, that it has to fit in the dream and will be criticised merciless ;)  (hey, I'm joking! )

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« Reply #21 on: 12 July 2004, 18:59:00 »

Thankyou for reading it, as not many people do. I am often one of those people, being busy an all. Also the reason why I couldn't reply earlier.

Onto the story, it was based off a RPG pen 'n' paper game called Vampire: The Masquerade and Vampire: The Dark Ages. These games commonly name vampires as kindred. This might have led to some confussion. The story revolves around the Catholic Roman Legions attacking the Barbaric Celts, who have come to worship the kindred, thus the kindred are inclined to help them out. It required a bit if guess work, I do admit that. About the frequent comma use, I am sorry if this demolished the experience for you, but this method, of frequent use is practiced at our English classes, and English is not my native language either. I quite frankly like comma usage, though this is just me and my English teachers... Thankyou for the feedback, I enjoyed this thread, as I met more new people and an exciting project.

Stay sound Talia Sturmwind, and enjoy the day, :wink2

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