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irate velociraptor
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« on: 30 September 2005, 16:29:00 »

This is my first entry in this board p223.ezboard.com/fsanthar...=184.topic
Am I doing this right? Please comment on my entery.

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« Reply #1 on: 30 September 2005, 16:56:00 »

It is a good outline. But first make sure to introduce your self to the rest of us here. Tell us about your self. Take a look at other entries already on the site, to get an idea of what to write. But welcome to the Dream.

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« Reply #2 on: 01 October 2005, 06:53:00 »

Welcome to the Dream. I would suggest choosing another name, one that fits in with the atmosphere of Santharia. Also, are you logged in? I ask because the board is showing you as a visitor, and you won't be able to edit your posts unless you log in.

As far as your entry is concerned, it is a good start, but it lacks details. Every section should at least be a paragraph, whenever possible.  


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« Reply #3 on: 05 October 2005, 19:00:00 »

I've chnaged the name I post from irate velociraptor and I've done som more on my plant entry please comment.
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