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Dagon Fai Ur
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« on: 12 April 2006, 20:57:00 »

Will be continuing to add information to this as I get to it :)  

Overview:
Colonel Jezla Khizaar (859b.S - 822b.S) commanded the Erpheronian Army at the end of the War for Ancyros. He became known during the war for his perfect defense tactics that helped ward off the invaded Caltharian forces that began in 823b.S. After the Erpheronians had achieved victory over the Caltharians, and the Treaty of Veltin had been signed, Khizaar lead the troops home, marching through the halfling-lands of the Silvermarshes. This day during the month of the Singing Bird, in 822b.S. would become known as Massacre at the Silvershire as Khizaar and the Erpheronians found wounded Caltharians being treated by the halflings. This was seen as treason to the Erpheronian Kingdom and Khizaar ordered a full attack upon the Silvershire, slaughtering halflings and wounded Caltharians. Despite Khizaar's diligent work to place the blame upon the Caltharians, the truth eventually leaks out and in the Month of the Rising Sun, in 822b.S. Khizaar is beheaded.

Appearance:
The Erpheronian Commander, Khizaar, stood nearly 2 peds in height. Missing the mark by a few nailsbreadths, Jezrel Khizaar stands above the average Erpheronian. He was equipped with, aside from his Ephord, cold grey eyes, coupled with, which is commonly described as, an unforgiving and strong face that was cleanly shaven. He wore his light brown, shoulder length hair, loosely and was seen amongst the Erpheronian women to be one of his most attractive assets. His cold and intimidating looks have been said to describe his actual personality in full. He was a harsh Commander on the battlefield and a cold acquaintance off of the battlefield.

History:
Although he was only 13 when the War of Ancyros began, his invovlement in the war was immediate. His father was a regular troop in the Erpheronian Army, and although Jezrel would spend the first 6 years of the war under his mother's care, she was not at all negligent in enrolling the young Khizaar in basic military and combat training courses.

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Edited by: Dagon Fai Ur at: 4/18/06 4:20
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« Reply #1 on: 21 April 2006, 13:10:00 »

Note: Make sure not to write the Overview part like a short summary of the character's bio, but try to capture in more general words what he was and what role he played. Reading the Overview should provide you with a very rough sketch about the character, but the amount of details you mention aren't needed at this part of the entry.


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