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« Reply #15 on: 27 March 2002, 16:55:00 »

I assume you are talking about Saban?  This might help you out.  The only thing of real importance would be near the end where it talks of Dark elves. www.santharia.com/places/faavcalar.htm

This should lay the ground work for the government and religious aspects.  Hope this helps.

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« Reply #16 on: 27 March 2002, 18:26:00 »

huh, That helps a bit in the origin of Dark elves. I see where things come from now, And I'll change the text accordingly.

But I was speaking of Beringstin Dimeye, who is mentioned in the description of the tribe. Does he have a 'Person Entry?'

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« Reply #17 on: 28 March 2002, 13:15:00 »

He has one, see www.santharia.com/people/beringstin.htm - it is 3 years old, so it's very, very fragmentary. But at least there is an entry. You could also read the story of the "Elvenfall" at www.santharia.com/meneteka/elvenfall.htm


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« Reply #18 on: 28 March 2002, 14:51:00 »

One way around it I guess would be to make the Maevrhim shadow elves (see Styreans entery). They attend  HEC so drow ain't a good plan. But again, The stuff I have on my notepad isn't on the site. I can change it - I just rather wouldn't.

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« Reply #19 on: 28 March 2002, 15:21:00 »

Oh, Wren, you won't need to change anything. I move the tribe to the Paelon, making them the Eophyrhim. I've altered the text to fit the area, and have made a famous person for them.

I've read the Texts Art provided, and I'll add Beringstin to the tribe's history.

So, yaaay! Everyone's happy!

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« Reply #20 on: 29 March 2002, 14:34:00 »

Vireese,I put Saban the II or Saban DarkHeart in the Paelon Forest in my story, along with another Fa'av'cal'ar, (Elven Capitol) but I think your history is after the War of the Chosen so it won't matter.  

Beringston Dimeye is the son of Saban Darkheart?  Art can that be possible.  That way his son would continue his legacy as he tried to continue his fathers Saban the Ist.

If that is not possible then tell me and I will forget it.

Thanks Capher.

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« Reply #21 on: 29 March 2002, 23:44:00 »

thanks you guys, for helping me out. I really appreciate the hep you guys are giving me, instead of telling me it's WRONG.

*grins* Okay... so what needs to be done? Just some research to see if it fits, eh?

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« Reply #22 on: 30 March 2002, 16:11:00 »

Well most of what you have is very good, detailed well written, etc.  It's just the history and religion that needs some work, either that or a re-working of several history items already up.  See my comment on your hunter-cleric in the people section.

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« Reply #23 on: 31 March 2002, 21:49:00 »

It'd be ridiculous to demand a re-write on History and Religion. I'll just change what I have.

It's just so... MUCH and so deep, I can't even begin to wrap my brain around it. I've tried and can only skim before I get lost... I'm good at creation, but basing it in other things is a little... hard...

I'll try though...

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« Reply #24 on: 01 April 2002, 00:57:00 »

I found some pieces that I've learned from, namely Saban going to the Paelon after ditching the Bone Queen.

Uh. So... Saban created the Eophyrhim... not just some 'Elves'... okey... I'll fix that right away.

huhm...

Here I am, trying to be all intricate and there's no reason to be... teh.

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Okay. I did some historical changes. Is there anything wrong?

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« Reply #25 on: 03 April 2002, 05:48:00 »

Always make sure to search for all already existing references to a term on the site, e.g. "Eophyrhim" by using the site's Search Engine, Viresse (Site Menu)! This way you won't miss anything important which has already been elaborated so far on the tribe e.g.


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« Reply #26 on: 03 April 2002, 15:05:00 »

Dah. That search engin is WAAY hidden. I found it though, and now my dates look waaay stupid. You guys are laughing at me now, aren't you?

The history table helps alot too, I totally forgot about that.

Uhm. So... how does it look now, friends? Any better? * mumbles to self about looking at tribe histories before delving into construction*

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« Reply #27 on: 05 April 2002, 14:24:00 »

Who us? laughing? *looks innocently around*  Never!  Especially at a fellow Santharian who is just a little wet behind the ears.  But she will learn... eventually.

Actually it looks good to me, now that you have straitened a few minor details out.  But, the elven experts have to give their final ok before I upload it.  Ok? Vir.

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« Reply #28 on: 06 April 2002, 03:55:00 »

* nods eagerly* I wasn't expecting to have to research that much history... But now that I have, I feel a little more secure. And that Search tool totally helped, I didn't even know that was THERE.

Thanks for helping me out, you guys... especially by abstaining with the  'This is Crap. work Harder' comments, I get enough of those at school.

Thanks.

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« Reply #29 on: 07 April 2002, 03:28:00 »

Ok, I assume the entry is more or less done now so far, so I start integrating it, ok Viresse?

Just a short note: It's the "Paelelon Forest", not "Paelon" - also changed that at your hound entry already. I'll correct that in the final entry, so no prob. Just wanted to let you know.


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