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« Reply #15 on: 22 June 2002, 20:34:00 »

I GIVE UP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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« Reply #16 on: 23 June 2002, 03:36:00 »

Well, well, I'm incredibly sorry but some more patience, please. I'm running at 200% currently, working 16 hours the day minimum and 18 hours the day normally so have "slight" problems to keep up on the boards and also Drogo is not back on a regular basis.

As I see it the entry is proceeding well, the two things that still need work or must be cleared up are the peoples' section (where I'd add more about these guys, traditions and way of living can be described there as well, at least one sentence seems to less to me) and you should clear up with Artimidor the thing with Remusiat, where this town is located and if it is possible to rename one of the towns of the map.

Atfer that I think this entry might go up though I don't know what others think. Can perhaps someone else post his/her suggestions here as well? I shouldn't be here after all, I should be working!


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« Reply #17 on: 23 June 2002, 12:23:00 »

Koldar, sorry about the misunderstanding... the "getting annoyed" and "I give up" was about my picture not working, not about nobody showing up. Please except my apologies

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« Reply #18 on: 24 June 2002, 06:12:00 »

*Phew* Was already worried. :)

I'd suggest to try to flesh out the details of the entry, long tribes entries are good! I'll try to check them and give some more hints where needed but as said I have a RL-rodeo here so I don't know if I find much time...

Maybe some others can look through it as well? (Hint! Hint!) ;)

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« Reply #19 on: 24 June 2002, 08:41:00 »

Details....More details :)

Right Timeras...I prepared to admit you've put a lot of effort into adapting this entry and I admire your persistance. So here's an official apology for giving you such a hard time when you started.

You could really do with going to town on apperance, about the people....You have them well thought out in your head....So let that show! What are they good at and why? Why are there so many beggars hinted at in your sig? The people section is your chance to draw people into what life in the city is like, so take it.

Same with housing.... What do people keep in those two rooms, what are the functions of the rooms? How many people live there? Just stuff like that. Try and draw people in. You can't go into enough detail!

Good start...just flesh it all out


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« Reply #20 on: 24 June 2002, 13:24:00 »

ok, modification, the Remusian territory stretches from the mantle woods and the heath of wilderon, to the city of Rhemir. and based on some recent meterials and resources questions... We own the gathorn mts. (any objections?)
p.s. thanks wren.

Edited by: Timeras at: 6/23/02 11:57:21 pm
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« Reply #21 on: 26 June 2002, 01:32:00 »

 "the Remusians are not Nomadic infact they are very civilized."

If THAT isn't an insult then tell me what an insult is!

As if my nomadic Shendar are uncivilized! at least the normal family has more room to live in than your average family!

*thinking about sending some Shendar teacher up there to teach them some important things, if it  only wasn't so cold up there...*

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« Reply #22 on: 26 June 2002, 08:32:00 »

You've to admit, they're rather dirty and uncivilized! *runs away* :lol


I think you might change that and point out that they're living mostly in towns and fortified villages. As there were no other Ice tribes developed, yet, I think we can't say if they'll be nomads at all....

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« Reply #23 on: 26 June 2002, 12:48:00 »

hmm true.. I shall change it right now

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« Reply #24 on: 27 June 2002, 15:01:00 »

ok ... what must i do (other than the people entry because i just cant do anything else on that) to get this entry posted on the site.

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« Reply #25 on: 30 June 2002, 00:35:00 »

Hey Austin!  It's Pip, What are you posting this on sombody elses site for! I thout we were just gonna have the Remusians in the comics. With Timeras and the Forsaken blade and everything. They better let us use this later and not copyright it or anything! C'ya man and next time ask before you use OUR ideas!

p.s. You werent lying this site is pretty cool !

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« Reply #26 on: 30 June 2002, 00:50:00 »

well, he hasn't made much, so if he stopped now he wouldn't have a problem...

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« Reply #27 on: 30 June 2002, 02:57:00 »

This doesn't read nice...

For copyright issues I think that Santharia claims the right to use the stuff that gets uploaded on the the site because it would be pretty dumb if someone shows up after years and demands his stuff to be put down because he's suddenly making money with it. Beyond that at least in Germany the creator of something always stays the owner of the things he created...

Timeras I would clear up this issue with your friend and decide together what to do. In general the entry is still lacking detail. You describe many things in one sentence. Take these and make more out of it, but as said clear that up with your friend first!

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« Reply #28 on: 30 June 2002, 11:25:00 »

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I'm not predudice, I just hate everybody- A.R.M. (me)

Edited by: Timeras at: 7/3/02 6:02:11 am
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« Reply #29 on: 02 July 2002, 15:20:00 »

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I'm not predudice, I just hate everybody- A.R.M. (me)

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