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DarSeideous
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« on: 23 January 2001, 00:53:00 »

Hey, I was looking through the god's profiles, and an idea for a poem came to me, what do you think?

Etherus

Perhaps she will prove the worlds destruction
This goddess of desire
She the spirit of seduction
Guardian of fire
She wears her many faces fair
Each more beautiful the than the last
But only a fool would trust the god of lust
Or pay the price she asks

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« Reply #1 on: 23 January 2001, 12:16:00 »

Nice poem, Dar'Seideous (hey, your signature is working!!), but I have the strange feeling that Etherus is male!! Do you have a male version???

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« Reply #2 on: 23 January 2001, 12:57:00 »

But the picture beside the name is a woman!

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« Reply #3 on: 23 January 2001, 13:21:00 »

Not really:

1.) Etherus is described as male...
2.) Click on the head of Etherus and... Ahhhh!

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« Reply #4 on: 23 January 2001, 13:38:00 »

Well, he has indeed very feminine aspects. Would think that the God of Excess is some kind of Hermaphrodite or something.
In the description he is also referred as God with the thousand faces, so I would think that at least the two genders would be represented in his appearance!

Would be less sexist, too! (;) )

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« Reply #5 on: 23 January 2001, 15:33:00 »

You're right there, Koldar... Of course I first thought of Baccus/Janus/Dionysos (two-headed) when describing Etherus, so two genders in general for Etherus is completely ok. However, the picture shows a man (if you enlarge it) - or the woman has indeed some desperate breast problem...

However, how about changing in every line of the poem between He and She? Could be an interesting effect and would suit the essence of the manyfaced Etherus well, I guess...

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« Reply #6 on: 23 January 2001, 17:26:00 »

Okay, that really is a woman's head on a mans body, but here is the male version.

Etherus

Perhaps he will prove the world's destruction
This lone god of fire.
He the voice of seduction
And lord of all desire
Wears his many faces fair.
Each more beautiful then the last
But who can trust the god of lust
Or pay the price he asks?

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« Reply #7 on: 23 January 2001, 17:42:00 »

Your all teasin me with those signatures! How do I make one?

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« Reply #8 on: 25 January 2001, 14:23:00 »

Ok, will integrate the poem, maybe directly at the entry of Etherus. Thanx, Dar'Seideous:)

Signatures: You need to know how to make a GIF-pic... Gean promised to do some for the members, but he seems a bit stressed currently...

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« Reply #9 on: 04 February 2001, 14:14:00 »

Poetry!
ok goodie, kewl, very nice DarSeideous. I do like it muchly (sorry am a bit overdoing things ;)   )

Kharda, I have good trust the stressed situation is going to end pretty soon, get in touch with me and I'll fix you a signature and picture if you wish.

www.marhillen.f2s.com/fonts/ look here for examples of signature/font thingies

Edited by: Gean Firefeet at: 2/3/01 8:21:17 pm
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