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« on: 16 January 2006, 14:29:00 »

Name:
The Eclipsed Lance

Weapon Type:
Polearm

Overview:
A mightyly cursed spear gifted with the power of the sun and the moon but at the terrible price of a curse:

The bearer of this mighty lance
Shall be cursed with death forthhance
And this blade will bring 12 more days
To live before your soul pays


The lance can slay any foul beast with a single brush onto the hide.But the bearer is cursed with 12 more days of life before death is summoned to play its part.

History:

In the times before civilisation a tortured soul was given a chance;1 last chance.
He was given a plate to wear and a lance to bear.
But his fight was not even;What Mortal being could slay an army of fierce creatures at least 500 men strong.
So as he was struck down he forced his soul into his lance.
He still lives on to this day in The Eclipsed Tome

Edited by: Lumthern at: 1/16/06 18:35
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« Reply #1 on: 17 January 2006, 11:10:00 »

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The Eclipsed Tome I dont like this name sounds more like a book then a weapon

Weapon Type:
Polearm

Overview:
A mightyly cursed spear gifted with the power of the suns and the moons but at the terrible price of a curse: Caelereth has only 1 sun and 1 moon
The bearer of this mighty lance
Shall be cursed with death forthhance
And this blade will bring 12 more days
To live before your soul pays
this might make a good intro to a story
The lance can slay any foul beast with a single brush onto the hide.But the bearer is cursed with 12 more days of life before death is summoned to play its part. This might work well as part of a story plot
History:

In the times before life a tortured soul was given a chance;1 last chance. How was someone living before life?
He was given a plate to wear and a lance to bear.
But his fight was not even;What Mortal being could slay a mighty Cyclops.
So as he was struck down he forced his soul into his lance.
He still lives on to this day in The Eclipsed Tome This would require at least level 7 life magic since that is what is required to drain life he would have to drain his own life and put it in the polearm, by the time he could do something like this he should be able to make a cyclops spontaneously combust.

Before you continue this flag the myth forum Cosmology, Myths and Religions . It will be a lot easier to correct problems if you find them early.

Someone who has been on this board longer might have more to say, but thats all I can think of at this point.

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« Reply #2 on: 17 January 2006, 12:36:00 »

Well i'm knew and I don't know much but i've edited it:wave  

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« Reply #3 on: 17 January 2006, 13:04:00 »

There is a template on top of this forum which tells you how to do such an entry.
This weapon can be only mythical, so please describe it accordingly!

And look at the other weapons entries, the short ones are old and not good as a reference!

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« Reply #4 on: 18 January 2006, 16:45:00 »

Indeed.  While I do mundane weapons, you should check out the Lance entry.  That should serve as a good template for you, but keep in mind that this is just one blade.  That opens a lot of questions and possibilities for you.

Just do your research.  Late'

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